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Whatever you want

I really enjoyed this one:

Whatever you want
by Draycevixen





"So you called me. What do you want Ray?"

"I want you."

"Want me to what?"

"I want you."

"Look mate, it's late and I know you've had a lot to drink, but you're going to have to be more specific about what you want me to do. Spit it out."

"Earlier, you said whatever you want, Ray."

"And I meant it so you don't have to keep repeating it."

Bodie watched as Doyle shifted his weight to one hip, staring at the carpet. Doyle appeared nervous. Doyle was never nervous.

"D'you need someone killed?"

"Course not." Doyle's head jerked up.

"'Cos if it's Cowley you have in mind, I'm only prepared to maim him. Now anyone else--"

"I don't need anyone killed or maimed." Ray ran one hand through his damp hair in a useless attempt to push it back from his face, before attempting a grin. "But it's
awfully nice of you to offer."

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shooting2kill
Mar. 7th, 2010 09:48 pm (UTC)
You know, I think our minds are working on similar paths because I often read the stories you recommend just as you're recommending them e.g. I'd only just discovered Bardicvoice when you mentioned one of her stories and I've read both Raymond's Joy very recently (and enjoyed it) *and* Whatever you want and loved the light, humourous touch. Especially lines like the following:

"'Cos if it's Cowley you have in mind, I'm only prepared to maim him. Now anyone else--"

That is so Bodie!

And one of the things I enjoy about your choice of story is the variety - if I haven't read them already it makes me want to read them, so, thanks, again.

Edited at 2010-03-07 09:50 pm (UTC)
cloudless_9193
Mar. 7th, 2010 10:27 pm (UTC)
I think our minds are working on similar paths ...
And one of the things I enjoy about your choice of story is the variety - if I haven't read them already it makes me want to read them

That makes me happy, to know there is someone out there who talks the same language and enjoys the same kind of stories. :-)

And this line is terrific. The idea of him loving Doyle so much he would even sacrifice Cowley to make him happy.
draycevixen
Jul. 30th, 2010 06:33 pm (UTC)

Hello!

A mate let me know that you've been kind enough to rec a few of my stories and I just wanted to wander over here and thank you for your kindness in doing so.

I write stories because I love the lads and want to write about them and because I hope they will entertain my fellow fans. As I don't consider myself a "writer for the ages" I'm always very pleasantly surprised if anything of mine is recced.

So again, thank you and I'm glad you've enjoyed them. :D

cloudless_9193
Jul. 30th, 2010 07:15 pm (UTC)
Thanks for your message! Your stories are all so well written they deserve to be recced. And I'm not quite through yet. :-)
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