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roven75
Feb. 2nd, 2011 09:04 pm (UTC)
I like the style, it reminds me of old film footage. And the orange of the shirt is a nice accent that keeps the overall impression from being too unvaried.

But most of all I like Bodie's expression - a certain fragility, forlornness, I don't know how to explain it better - and the way he is positioned, looking into the picture.
cloudless_9193
Feb. 3rd, 2011 05:59 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I think he looks so very lost here, the same as in the hospital in the scene before this one. With fragility you are spot-on. A very unusual look for him. :-)
smirra
Feb. 2nd, 2011 11:25 pm (UTC)
Yes I like him too.
He's got that "I'm fed up with this" guesture on his mouth. I like how the colour of his shirt is burning, the still supple suede jacket.
I think I would probabaly remove the black part on the right though- a strong element to the eye for no real reason.
cloudless_9193
Feb. 3rd, 2011 06:06 pm (UTC)
Great, a discussion! ;-) I'm glad you still like it. I've tried it without the shadow behind the door. But I had the feeling my eyes needed something there to hold on to, some kind of boundary to the picture and at the same time a counterpart to the shadows on his face and neck. I think I could have made it wider, though, or a little bit lighter.
smirra
Feb. 3rd, 2011 07:39 pm (UTC)
Hee! Art Academy Vienna! Digitale Werkkunstschule...
I see the counterpart thing. The shadow lighter sounds great to me, that way it would range "below" in greyscale to the deep black of Bodie's shadows, not "fight" with them for dominance (as it has the exitement of the red colour of the shirt) and it would go nicely with the faint grey next to it on the left.
But that are just details *g*. A beautiful series of wps.
cloudless_9193
Feb. 3rd, 2011 07:59 pm (UTC)
Art Academy Vienna! Digitale Werkkunstschule... Sounds great! I'll take you advice and will slightly alter the picture. Thanks! :-)
andreathelion
Feb. 3rd, 2011 05:00 pm (UTC)
Wow, I like. Very subtle.
And I agree with Smirra on the black part on the right.
It maybe would add a more 'intense feeling' (if that should be
possible *g*) on the wallpaper without it.
But on the other hand, it's sort of contrast to the shirt colour.

Anyway, well done you and I like all the parts so far.
I hope, there are coming some more!
cloudless_9193
Feb. 3rd, 2011 06:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you, I'm glad you like it despite the black part on the right. As to why I chose to keep it, please read my reply to Smirra's comment. :-)
firlefanzine
Feb. 3rd, 2011 09:21 pm (UTC)
22:18 Uhr - is it the new version for me? - because I'm not disturbed by any shadow at the right side.

I think that all four pictures are spot on and they show how special that episode was!
cloudless_9193
Feb. 3rd, 2011 09:37 pm (UTC)
Hi, no it's the original version. And I think I'll keep it this way after all, as I discovered that I would have to start from the beginning and do all those layers and masks once again. So I'm happy that you like them as they are. :-)
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