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Breakdown

A rather short story about the lads in a difficult situation.


Breakdown
by Lozalong


He hopes that Bodie hasn’t annoyed them. When it was Doyle’s turn he stayed quiet, got slapped around a little for his insolence but at least he didn’t cheek them: Bodie, on the other hand, is well-known for his mouth. He imagines the glint of defiance in his partner’s eye, so familiar to him, as familiar as the swell of pride that rises even now in his chest -- he tries to ignore it, though, because as if Bodie needs any encouragement to behave recklessly. The best thing is to try and get out of this alive and, really, anything else can wait a while.

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biani
Mar. 31st, 2010 05:44 pm (UTC)
Oh yes, I saved this one right after I read it for the first time. Good one!
cloudless_9193
Mar. 31st, 2010 10:15 pm (UTC)
I liked it so much that I printed it out.
Terrific icon! :-)
ci5mates
Apr. 1st, 2010 12:37 am (UTC)
What the odds, I read this one last night, how concidental is that! I absolutely loved it. I really felt what they were going through because it was so well written.
cloudless_9193
Apr. 1st, 2010 04:30 am (UTC)
it was so well written.
There were some tender moments which touched me deeply like the foreheads pressed together and the kiss. :-)
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